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Second opinion
« on: September 03, 2010, 10:20:43 am »

This is the drawing I did for the event thing. It's still in pencil since I want to hear where I might be able to improve, before I ink and color the image.

I did catch a couple of things, like the fact my character's thigh probably is a might small.
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Re: Second opinion
« Reply #1 on: September 04, 2010, 12:14:50 am »

its properly adequate.
i have no criticism to add at all
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Re: Second opinion
« Reply #2 on: September 04, 2010, 11:25:06 am »

Well, here are some things to note.

Arms have slighty varied lengths after the elbow, so you could mess with that a little if you want.

The biggest thing I notice is the face of...what I assume is Zephr.
Eyes do not necessarily have to be "eye" shaped, for one,  and considering the way he is facing, the one on our left should probably differ from what we see.  It sort of messes around with the perspective of his head.  Fixing that might do it a lot of good.

The fur lines are great, and you have a pretty clean drawing style, though!  Certainly headed into a good position!
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Re: Second opinion
« Reply #3 on: September 06, 2010, 09:49:47 am »

Okay, thank you for putting in your input you two.

I went back and tried fixing those points you mentioned Zephr, hopefully it looks better now. Again, I'd like to ask for some feedback, just as some really last minute check. Thanks.
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Re: Second opinion
« Reply #4 on: September 06, 2010, 02:38:38 pm »

Yeah that is an improvement.  I might want to reduce the size of the eye on the right to match more closely to the other, but I think the image is good enough overall, unless someone else has anything to say.
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Re: Second opinion
« Reply #5 on: September 08, 2010, 01:37:35 am »

Looks nice. Have taken the liberty to scribble some details over it, hope it's of some assistance.

Obviously there'll be some style related choices you'll make as you go, but personally I feel like the bodies could be a little longer there... On a side view I find eyes seem to be more of a different shape (but then that's front facing eyes, herbivores etc have them on the side, whether you choose to use that or not).

The arm on Zephr doesn't quite seem long enough or in quite the most comfortable position... though I'm not currently staring at a refference for that angle so I might not be 100% correct there.

I've taken to using a ball shape under the head, and using lines curving around it (as though it was 3D) to place the eyes and what not.

Nice pose too btw :)
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Re: Second opinion
« Reply #6 on: September 08, 2010, 10:34:27 am »

Ok, thank you.

@Marlkintass: Yeah, I definitly see what you mean. Always something that could've been done when I draw, especially after you point it out. With the eyes in particular that's kinda something I seemingly don't do quite as often, the eyes you suggested, but I definitly need to practice to do for sure. An old habit I guess. I don't understand what you mean with the body, the blue markings you did to show me, seem almost similar to what I did in terms of length, then again I might be just being naive and not looking at it close enough.

I definitly see what you mean with Zephr's arm, I had fixed it, though not as long as you had, but I can definitly understand. I had my brother's help me with the look, and while I'm comfortable how I drew it, I admit part of me was cocking my head side-to-side because I had the sense something was off.

I'm partial to the full view on the side look, but in the long run I definitly find what you do suggest, and how you show it, very helpful. So many thanks. :)
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Re: Second opinion
« Reply #7 on: September 09, 2010, 09:34:31 pm »

Glad to be helpful :)

If you mean the body length comment, I was just saying I felt like it was a tad shorter around the torso than I'd have thought gave the best look, but on second look I'm not 100% sure. Anyway, characters heights differ anyway XD

Still not 100% sure how I did the arm myself either, but that stuff is always difficult. If you ever have trouble with hands btw, the best advice I got was to look at them as a whole shape, not just fingers. I sort of draw the palm shape, then the first set of knuckles, etc... usually it seems to give a better shape.

Anywho, glad to help, will keep an eye out for more :)
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